" To understand just one life, you have to swallow the world." Well i wont open the doors nor the windows to my world, but I'm ready to allow peep-holes!

Tuesday, July 10, 2007

Love me the way you do

I need someone
to fill the voids that you have left behind.
Someone who would fill these empty spaces
with blocks of love and life.
The person who knows
not only how to heal the wounds
that he has inflicted,
but knows how to accept
the lesions left behind;

He who leaves the leafs of optimism,
not as shattered dreams on the grave
but as dreams-
to be replenished again;

Someone who knows this much
and so much more,
someone to love me
for a long way through...
Who would love me the way you do?

15 comments:

Dream catcher said...

it can never be the same..as echoes...laughs..wishes n dreams..song n dance everything is then a repeat sentence ..n something repeated are never the same..

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

thats the reason for the last line-
"who would love me the way you do?"

it can never be the same with anyone else, nor can "another" person emulate the emotions felt and extended.

Crazy Krish said...

you are truly gifted.. may you find the love you are looking for... if you have not found yet...

Phoenix said...

Touching poem, very sweetly written.
No too people love the same; every love leaves behind an unfulfilled void when it disappears; loves and lovers are beyond comparison.
Yet, the general idea goes one may be healed, or hope to be healed, for someday u'd find he who listens the unheard, and then u'd be able to look behind the void.

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

Crazy krish:
Thank you for your words.

Phoenix:
you have infact summed up the hidden meaning very well,
but what the real worry is-is that sometimes the void is too big and no one can mend it.some parts just die when such void is created.

confessing7girl said...

hi girl thanks for visiting me and dropping me a line!! :D oh beautifuuuuuuuuul poem!

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

confessing7girl:
thank you and it was a delight reading your posts!

deboo said...

hey anu hope ur wounds may heal up soon.... yes a love and lover can not be de same ...... but i cn be healed "i hope"... tke cre...

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

deboo:
gal dont worry yourself too much.
i shall always love u. u will always be there i know :)

rita said...

hi beta
whats wrong
why so depressing,I do not want you like this .Is something wrong do let me know.
If this is just a poem -then its well written

ekta said...

@ love me the way you do

the above title contradicts "poison coated elixir" [:D],a very sweet and a calm feel in those lines.nice! :)

Sophiagurl said...

you know what's good about love? yes, you may never find the same kind of feeling that person emulated from you, but believe it or not...a greater one comes along =)it's just a matter of opening your eyes and realizing it exists. some don't believe it...but i'm living proof it does =)

and no one can love you better than yourself =)

WHAT'S IN A NAME ? said...

readin ur poetry its almost like going thru someone's most intimate diary entries. Are they ?? really ??

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

Ekta:
to most of those who know me- "I" contradict "me" ;) thank you :)

Sophiagurl:
what when a greater one comes along and its the greatest. are you still left with hope?
Its sad to know that no one would love us more than we ourselves.

what's in a name:
every poem is a diary in itself.
but yes my blog could be called a diary which emotes the feelings of quiet a lot many people.
"people only like what they can relate to." and in so much so, everyone who likes and appreciates my work would have had similar emotions at one point or another!

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