" To understand just one life, you have to swallow the world." Well i wont open the doors nor the windows to my world, but I'm ready to allow peep-holes!

Tuesday, February 26, 2008

Suicide

Mercy
Showeth on thee
Blessed
You seemed to be
Suffocated
It’s the way you’ve come to be

Altruism
Your only sin
Deadly
One word for your wrong
Aloof
Thy worldly garb

Content
That’s what you were
Alone
The punishment you bemoan
Cold
Thy heart made of gold

Catch
Your last drawn breath
Escape
The intermediate fall
Sigh
End of your everlasting cry.

15 comments:

crimsonflaw said...

beautiful....dare i say more.. need i say more...

Bobby said...

I've read this poem several times.
You are really touching on some deep emotions and morals and life and death stuff. This hit me hard.

aradhana said...

must say dis s a masterpiece...
it has sensitively brushed ma cauldron of emotions leaving ma soul quivering..

adavait said...

good one saw your profile at blooging to fame .... good poems.

Impressionist said...

WOW!

-I

purple deepens.. said...

Catch
Your last drawn breath
Escape
The intermediate fall
Sigh
End of your everlasting cry.


^sounds like magic!!! wonder..ful.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

this is very powerful!

floots said...

moving and most potent
thank you

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

crimsonflaw:
You've already said a lot, probably more than it deserved.
I have thanked you already ;)

bobby:
I didn't intend it to be moral oriented, but if that's how you persieve it, then thats how it must be. I'm glad you liked it. truly.

aradhana:
such praise!
I'm flattered!!!

adavait:
thank you :)

impressionist:
:D

purple deepens:
oh! i respect your appreciation!

J.Andrew Lockhart:
a compliment from you is really valuable. i love your work.

floots:
I'm glad you came by and liked what you read. Thank you for all the compliments!

Alok said...

Again a hard hitting piece ... I liked the clarity of the flow


Alok

orgasmik said...

Hi Anu,
Don't know if what i'm going to say goes with the subject you're dealing .
But you're cute alright.
The poems and all your writings is really wacking -so keep me wacking!
;)

jk

orgasmik said...
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PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

alok:
I'm glad you did :)

orgasmik:
blush blush?!
:P

The Soul of Alec Smart said...

Hey! Thanks for visiting my blog and leaving that sweet little comment :) And I just checked out your poetry.. it's just awesome.. Keep writing.

PS: can I blogroll you?

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