Mercy
Showeth on thee
Blessed
You seemed to be
Suffocated
It’s the way you’ve come to be
Altruism
Your only sin
Deadly
One word for your wrong
Aloof
Thy worldly garb
Content
That’s what you were
Alone
The punishment you bemoan
Cold
Thy heart made of gold
Catch
Your last drawn breath
Escape
The intermediate fall
Sigh
End of your everlasting cry.
About Me
- seraphicgirl1986
- This blog is the proprietorship of a 26 year old Indian, adult, female who shall henceforth be called seraphicgirl. The viewpoints expressed shall be the sole ownership of the lady mentioned above. Still cant guess my official job description? For the uninitiated I'm the lady who adorns a black and white suit underneath a black gown ;) When I'm not dressed in a zebra inspired attire (ehmm) I like to play the role of a closet beauty junkie! If you would like to contact me for further communication kindly email me here- seraphicgirl@gmail.com
Percy Bysshe Shelley
15 comments:
beautiful....dare i say more.. need i say more...
I've read this poem several times.
You are really touching on some deep emotions and morals and life and death stuff. This hit me hard.
must say dis s a masterpiece...
it has sensitively brushed ma cauldron of emotions leaving ma soul quivering..
good one saw your profile at blooging to fame .... good poems.
WOW!
-I
Catch
Your last drawn breath
Escape
The intermediate fall
Sigh
End of your everlasting cry.
^sounds like magic!!! wonder..ful.
this is very powerful!
moving and most potent
thank you
crimsonflaw:
You've already said a lot, probably more than it deserved.
I have thanked you already ;)
bobby:
I didn't intend it to be moral oriented, but if that's how you persieve it, then thats how it must be. I'm glad you liked it. truly.
aradhana:
such praise!
I'm flattered!!!
adavait:
thank you :)
impressionist:
:D
purple deepens:
oh! i respect your appreciation!
J.Andrew Lockhart:
a compliment from you is really valuable. i love your work.
floots:
I'm glad you came by and liked what you read. Thank you for all the compliments!
Again a hard hitting piece ... I liked the clarity of the flow
Alok
Hi Anu,
Don't know if what i'm going to say goes with the subject you're dealing .
But you're cute alright.
The poems and all your writings is really wacking -so keep me wacking!
;)
jk
alok:
I'm glad you did :)
orgasmik:
blush blush?!
:P
Hey! Thanks for visiting my blog and leaving that sweet little comment :) And I just checked out your poetry.. it's just awesome.. Keep writing.
PS: can I blogroll you?
This is great info to know.
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