" To understand just one life, you have to swallow the world." Well i wont open the doors nor the windows to my world, but I'm ready to allow peep-holes!

Friday, March 21, 2008

Deja Vu

In the distance

When the moon sings

Of earthly ballads

In crimson tones

And across the hill

When a bird flies

Over the fears

Of mortal souls

I dance

To a whispery tone

With a deep caress

Of your ever lasting hold

I sway

To the rhythm divine

In an exquisite

Rendezvous

A meeting

Which I have already borne

In a day

I have lived before.

34 comments:

Vik said...

Beautiful, to say the least. That line about a bird flying over the fears of mortal souls is simply awesome.

Cricket's Hearth said...

very nice take on deja vu

gautami tripathy said...

Welcome to WI! Keep posting..

dancing comes full circle

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

Vik:
I'm glad you liked it.

Cricket's hearth:
Thank you!

Gautami Tripathi:
I hope to continue :)

Alok said...

You know I am amazed at the complexity of ur thinking process ... Too good

"I dance

To a whispery tone

With a deep caress

Of your ever lasting hold

I sway" - loved the way u said this


Alok

paisley said...

what an absolutely stellar debut post.. i do so hope you keep joining us!!!!

purple deepens.. said...

Beautiful.

The essence of you is restored here.Welcome back !

Constance said...

Very nice!

Rambler said...

hey welcome to WI.. and I liked the idea of swaying to the rythmn divine.

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

Alok:
Thank you for appreciating what I wrote. My thinking process seems to be my biggest curse sometimes ;)

Paisley:
I'm glad you came by and liked what you got to read. Thank you!

Purple deepens:
As glad as I am to be here, I hope people continue to visit the page when I'm gone unannounced!

Constance:
Thank you!

Rambler:
Thank you for dropping by and acknowledging my poem. i hope to continue.
I, too have been very attached to the phrase ever since i first wrote it-despite the fact that i believe that I'm an atheist!

orgasmik said...

What a rendez-vous!!
With the singing moon; with a fearless bird;with a deep caress...
Carpe diem !!

Reading your poem reminds me of what
Ralph Waldo Emmerson said,
" if the sages ask thee why
this charm is wasted on the earth and sky.
Tell them dear, if eyes were made for seeing
then, beauty is its own excuse for being."
And want to thankyou specially for 'you know what'...!!
hugs.
j

crimsonflaw said...

exceedingly beautiful. you have robbed time of its essence in this one.

you have been writing some profound stuff of late.

awe inspiring....oh dear i just read it again... the enchantment of the seraphic girl !

Phoenix said...

I have lived before, too.

Beloved Dreamer said...

For a first timer, well done my dear. I loved these lines
"When the moon sings
Of earthly ballads
In crimson tones". Lovely and a good soon to be Passover to you and yours.

toujous, lanie-bd

jadey said...

I like this post and I think your poem very nicely sums up a day in the life of a moment of Deja vu

rebecca said...

oh, this was simply magnificent....what beautiful imagery!

Bobby said...

You ever heard of the music of the spheres?

Impressionist said...

u always amaze me!
Love it ^_^

-I

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

orgasmik:
Such praise!
Thank you J.

crimsonflaw:
Thank you so very much. I hope this pang of profoundness continues in my poetry!

Phoenix:
Yes, and I must say you have arisen from the ashes quite well!

Beloved dreamer:
I'm glad :)

Jadey, Rebecca, Impressionist:
Thank you!

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

Bobby:
As in the celestial bodies moving in a certain manner to produce music?

The Soul of Alec Smart said...

Hey!

Beautiful lines. Just blogrolled you.. hope that's fine with you.

- N

Bobby said...

Yeah, that's what I meant. Yeah, this made me think of that. Your poems spark so much thought.

freesherry said...

hey!
I am sherry and I have started a picture deication thread an my blog

impressionist has dedicated a picture and a message to you at
http://sherryrowl.blogspot.com/2008/03/say-it-with-pictures.html

he is waiting for your reply
take care

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

The soul of alec smart:
My pleasure!

Bobby:
I'm glad.

freesherry:
Thank you.

snigdha said...

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!

Stacey said...

Absolutely lovely words!!

zephyr said...

wow!!

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

Snigdha, Stacey and Zephyr:
Thank you :)

Lion Chiller said...

The poem has a beautiful flow!

Bobby said...

Where'd you go?

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

Lion chiller:
Thank you:)

Bobby:
Problems on the prowl.
meanwhile, wrote a short story on my other blog-
www.thejoypop.blogspot.com

Neeku said...

beautifully written !

Priya said...

Aren't I glad I landed on ur blog!

Exquisite writing!

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