" To understand just one life, you have to swallow the world." Well i wont open the doors nor the windows to my world, but I'm ready to allow peep-holes!

Thursday, March 20, 2008

Prose

When i look at you
I see me through-
a weakened soul
of blithering blues
a shrunken spirit
of darkened hues
a naked body
with nothing to lose;

The flight
of thy worldly garb
shows the plight
of this lonesome bard.

8 comments:

crimsonflaw said...

superior...dark and sinister and again .. really superior.

Bobby said...

The reflections in the eyes. Are both entities beat? You really got the rhymes down.

Phoenix said...

Nothing to lose,
and yet so much
Nowhere to go
yet, the rush.

ruSh.Me said...

I can only admire poetry....coz its just not my cup of Tea....
Amazing!!

purple deepens.. said...

the line 'nothing to lose' is a comfort.thanks.

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

crimsonflaw:
:D

Bobby:
No, not both

Phoenix:
Exactly, i wonder what we would have done with this piece if it was one of those multi-poet games at poetry.com!

rush.me:
Thank you :)

purple deepens:
it does sound comforting, but isn't really what it seems to be ;)

Alok said...

Why do I have a haunting sense here :) - I like dark :)


Alok

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

alok:
All is dark here :)