When i look at you
I see me through-
a weakened soul
of blithering blues
a shrunken spirit
of darkened hues
a naked body
with nothing to lose;
The flight
of thy worldly garb
shows the plight
of this lonesome bard.
I see me through-
a weakened soul
of blithering blues
a shrunken spirit
of darkened hues
a naked body
with nothing to lose;
The flight
of thy worldly garb
shows the plight
of this lonesome bard.
8 comments:
superior...dark and sinister and again .. really superior.
The reflections in the eyes. Are both entities beat? You really got the rhymes down.
Nothing to lose,
and yet so much
Nowhere to go
yet, the rush.
I can only admire poetry....coz its just not my cup of Tea....
Amazing!!
the line 'nothing to lose' is a comfort.thanks.
crimsonflaw:
:D
Bobby:
No, not both
Phoenix:
Exactly, i wonder what we would have done with this piece if it was one of those multi-poet games at poetry.com!
rush.me:
Thank you :)
purple deepens:
it does sound comforting, but isn't really what it seems to be ;)
Why do I have a haunting sense here :) - I like dark :)
Alok
alok:
All is dark here :)
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