" To understand just one life, you have to swallow the world." Well i wont open the doors nor the windows to my world, but I'm ready to allow peep-holes!

Friday, July 27, 2007

The wake up call

"Wake up!

They said you're ok,

stop chasing those relentless dreams;

stop fooling yourself,

your nightmares will go away.

Wake up,

dont be a child

dont dream your life away,

live your life

its a one time thing,

dont pass it away.

Wake up,

the day is blessed

the night is over

you've had enough rest.

Wake up,

why wont you?

dont do this,

now is not the time-

dont joke this way.

wake up,

cant you hear me say?"

She's not listening ,

wake her up please-


Dont do this to me!

"sorry miss,

we got it wrong-

she is long dead now,

there is no hope-

we should let her be."


Nothingman said...

Yummy...very necrophiliac!



The Acid Tongue said...

and she continues to amaze me.

So very true. Harsh, Practical, Real.

Sophiagurl said...

very nice...a little bit sad. but never-the-less, another beautiful poem =)

Indigo Lobster said...

mesmerizing poetry

Sach said...

like always "Mind Blowing!"

The Lad said...

Simply astounding.......

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

thank you!

the acid tongue:
such adulation!i wonder if its worth it :)

thank you and im glad you are still liking it!

indigo lobster:
thank you so much :)

thank you!

the lad:
glad you liked it!

The Acid Tongue said...

and she continues to confuse me.

if you meant if your work is worth all the admiraton, Hell yea it is.

And if you meant if all the admiration is worth 'it'(dunno what that it is, though), everything is not meant to lead somewhere. making a person happy is the best karma! i'm sure u agree.

Keep Writin, amazin and confusin ;)

Rajeev said...

splendid as always! :)

Keshi said...

good one!


WHAT'S IN A NAME ? said...

I agree, " Let us let her be ".

Anshul said...
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Anshul said...

thanks for "reading"...


The Raconteur... said...

I hate grammatical errors .... :D

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...


thank you!

What's in a name:
sometimes its the best thing to do- let everything be.

the pleasure was mine!

Jeya Anand said...

wow....nice post!

PoisOn CoAtEd ELiXir said...

Jeya Anand:
Thank you so much :)