"Wake up!
They said you're ok,
stop chasing those relentless dreams;
stop fooling yourself,
your nightmares will go away.
Wake up,
dont be a child
dont dream your life away,
live your life
its a one time thing,
dont pass it away.
Wake up,
the day is blessed
the night is over
you've had enough rest.
Wake up,
why wont you?
dont do this,
now is not the time-
dont joke this way.
wake up,
cant you hear me say?"
She's not listening ,
wake her up please-
GOD!
Dont do this to me!
"sorry miss,
we got it wrong-
she is long dead now,
there is no hope-
we should let her be."
17 comments:
Yummy...very necrophiliac!
;)
N
drumroll...
and she continues to amaze me.
So very true. Harsh, Practical, Real.
very nice...a little bit sad. but never-the-less, another beautiful poem =)
mesmerizing poetry
like always "Mind Blowing!"
Simply astounding.......
nothingman:
thank you!
yummy?!
the acid tongue:
such adulation!i wonder if its worth it :)
sophiagurl:
thank you and im glad you are still liking it!
indigo lobster:
thank you so much :)
sach:
thank you!
the lad:
glad you liked it!
and she continues to confuse me.
if you meant if your work is worth all the admiraton, Hell yea it is.
And if you meant if all the admiration is worth 'it'(dunno what that it is, though), everything is not meant to lead somewhere. making a person happy is the best karma! i'm sure u agree.
Keep Writin, amazin and confusin ;)
splendid as always! :)
good one!
Keshi.
I agree, " Let us let her be ".
thanks for "reading"...
:D
I hate grammatical errors .... :D
rajeev:
:)
Keshi:
thank you!
What's in a name:
sometimes its the best thing to do- let everything be.
anshul/raconteur:
the pleasure was mine!
wow....nice post!
Jeya Anand:
Thank you so much :)
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