Stabbed
by thousand brunts
the heart lived on
with the aching soul
body
the sanctum of their
matrimonial home.
In their bliss
they subdued
the harsh cold
as the carcass
protected them
from mysteries of life
which would continually unfold.
The shell
made of human skin
was but a living throne
of their woes
which they together had borne.
Tattered and torn
the shed would leak
of torrential storm
but they contended
whether hay or sunshine
not caring of external form.
It was not
cement mortar or stone
human hide
was one of clay
living
yet not accustomed
to life's play.
14 comments:
and in abattoir.. the skin grafted on the phenomenon of life...springing sprinkling..a breeze..forsaking the laws..enter inside the the shell...
loved this one..every syllable :)
lol the bliss of your home, from what it sounds like you live in hell!!!!!!!!
Dream Catcher:
thank you.
also, read ur part in "poets who blog", i guess the whole thing came out pretty well!
Anonymous:
Thanks for taking out time for my blog and leaving a comment.
but then, atleast i don choose to be an anonymous writer nor am i afraid of accepting what is.
Amazing poetry.. Read the last few posts too.. You write real well. Will visit this blog more often. Thanks for leaving a comment on my blog :)
this is beautiful. the sadness of association and the rush into the arms of time....I gasped, your words are varicoloured...
u write beautifully! WOW!
Keshi.
yeah was coming out well..then nobody to continue..left an end thot someone will carry fwd :(
anyways it was a nice chance to do poetry with u;)
its a rare and beautiful sight to see emotions flowing out so freely through words. Its brave, its right in your face and i dont know why i hav this sense of identification when i readur work everytime. keep writin girl.
Awesome piece of writing again.
did i ever tell u that ur a wonderful writer!?
ah! damn!
im really bad at remembering things!
peace & love
Jeevy
marvelous!!
ahh i hold an apology for not droppin in 4 so long...i guess i missed one of he finest write ups by the most fonest writer....awesum!!
such beautiful words... i was entranced by its melody and flow.
in trance... beautiful!!!
the soul of alec smart:
thank you so much!
it'll be my pleasure having you visit more often.
crimsonflaw:
thank you! your compliments are very inspiring in their own way!
Keshi:
thanks gal :)
Dream catcher:
it was a pleasure.
acid tongue:
its nice to know that u liked it. i hope the pleasure of association with my work is not due to shared remorse.
rajeev:
its really too flattering!
but im glad.
thanks.
jeya anand:
:) thank you
sach:
thanks gal. don worry, i was away-to my own little world.glad to see u here.
marketcurio:
thats too much praise! thanks :)
ss:
im glad, hope to see you more.
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