Day by day
from dusk till dawn
in dew sunshine or storm
this feeling grows in me
and keeps me warm
It should have been that of loss
made me forlorn
but this feeling in me
it keeps me warm
I might be reaching insanity
for what i seek
might not be true
but my heart doesn't believe that
even for seconds few
Such is this feeling in me
warmth it shall always be
Of what it is
i shall never know
a test
a phase
a path unknown
What was
is what is known
With this feeling of past known
future unknown
i listen to voices inside of me
This feeling in me says
it will bring us to we.
26 comments:
Liked this one very much. You bring out the "I" very well in your poems. Feels like reading a random diary entry. Honest yet subtle. ...One thing.. From now on I will be looking forward to read something on the outer-world from you. Howzzat ??? :) Reagards.
what's in a name:
thank you so much!
check out www.thejoypop.blogspot.com
its my new blog,
though i wish to keep this one active too!
I liked it very much ...loved the way u ended it
alok
thank you alok for appreciating my work.
A post after a long time! :D hehe!
great as always! Oh btwyou are tagged! go to my blog
peace & love
Jeevy
rajeev, i was away for a while. but this time i'm back with a new blog, actually an additional blog. lets see how long it stays. hope you pay a visit there too.
will visit ur blog fr more info on tagged.
Wonderful..hope ur wishes come true:)..
:) thank you jeya!
like always it was great to read you...
Very beautiful...I often wonder if we want to love or be loved...which is a more powerful emotion ?
i found the line
'' of what it is I shall never know ''
very very beautiful.
t
Hi. I found your site on another blog. Your name sounded interesting. So glad if came as this poem is lovely and a delight to read. I will be back.
love-bd
http://beloveddreamer.blogspot.com
all I gatta say
LOVELY!!!!
very nice post....!
first time here...will be back for more
This feeling in me says
it will bring us to we
Indeed!!!
Wonderful!!! Masterful
Didnt mean to intrude - but couldnt resist commenting :)
Good write!!
---K.
PS. Poison coated Elixir eh?
hmmm :) Imaginative, enticing, smack of a deep sense of foreboding, the ultimate temptation :)
Hmmm.
A good poem.Optimism in the last..
'..This feeling in me says
it will bring us to we.'..
Thanks for sharing. Good luck.
I came over from Mortarbled because your comments show profundity >oo< I'm glad I did, because I'm not disappointed; I'm drawn to the contemplative, meditative and introspective..:) You and Shakir have this in common. Stay inspired!
Hi there ..hope ..u have not forgotten me..:) well seems u away too with this magnificent post..
profound words:
..'with this feeling of past known
future unknown
i listen to voices inside of me..'
Thanks Sugar Coated, for sharing another wonderful post.
God bless.
u stopped bloggin kyaa ??
*wow*
that was a beautiful play of words :)
nice blog
tc
#umang#
Lovely poem. I imagine many people feel that way sometimes; I know I do.
Very touching blog...awaiting your next poem.
love this one - and the illustration is the perfect complement
cheers
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